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Did anyone notice???
The house makes no sense.
When Sarah and Charlie walk in, Charlie yells up the stairwell to see if there are any bats and murderers or vampires or whatnot. That stairwell is on a hallway - go to the end, turn left and go to the end again, and there's a door with a flight of stairs leading to the attic.
Huh?
I noticed this after the story was mostly polished up and I didn't want to have to rethink it all or take away Charlie's silly line. So I left them both and wondered if anyone would say anything.
No one did
The house makes no sense.
When Sarah and Charlie walk in, Charlie yells up the stairwell to see if there are any bats and murderers or vampires or whatnot. That stairwell is on a hallway - go to the end, turn left and go to the end again, and there's a door with a flight of stairs leading to the attic.
Huh?
I noticed this after the story was mostly polished up and I didn't want to have to rethink it all or take away Charlie's silly line. So I left them both and wondered if anyone would say anything.
No one did
